On writing reviews
Posted by elena | Posted in General, Literary musings | Posted on 07-12-2009
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I seem to have gone on an email newsletter subscribing craze. I blame J.T. Oldfield’s incredibly entertaining newsletter, ‘This Week at Bibliofreak’. In the latest edition, Cara from Ooh…Books! wrote a great guest post on the absence of negative reviews in book blogs.
I’ve been meaning to do a post on what it means to write a good review, and Cara articulated almost exactly what my thoughts have been on the lack of negative book reviews in the blogosphere. (For those of you who haven’t read this yet, I’ll quickly summarise).
Negative reviews
Cara suggests that book bloggers deliberately skip reviewing a book they don’t like in order to stunt its growth in the online search environment.
The idea that people would do this astounds and frightens me. To dislike a book so intensely that you want to actively block its presence online? You must really think a lot of your blog if you think that simply refusing to mention a book would have any impact on its overall success. Sure, book blogs are incredibly influential in the global online community but really, unless you were a major book blog with thousands of unique daily visitors, I somehow doubt the effectiveness of such a plan.
Cara also makes an excellent point on the importance of negative reviews on books that have received a lot of hype. While I try (in vain) to avoid these books altogether, I enjoy reading negative reviews better than overwhelmingly glowing ones. Reviews that are critical and don’t simply read as a press release for an author tend to be more honest and, well, to put it bluntly, well-written. This is not a hard and fast rule, just something I’ve observed over time.
What makes a good review
Everyone has their own opinion about this. Our taste in reviews is as varied as our personal reading tastes. I don’t think my personal tastes represent anyone else’s but my own, and having had discussions about this in the blogosphere, this is what I look for:
It must be a well-written review.
Have you written something that you are proud of? Book reviewers obviously love books. We surround ourselves with the greatest writers the world has to offer on a daily basis. So when it comes to discussing what you liked or didn’t like, it’s only fair to yourself and the book being reviewed, that you’ve put some thought into it. I’m not a big fan of reviews that simply cut and paste the blurb, followed by “I liked the part where” and “I didn’t like how”. To me, this just isn’t thoughtful writing. Reviews need to appear to hold a bit of weight behind them and overuse of the first person dilutes this.
Work out your intention and stick to it
Matt from A Guy’s Moleskine Notebook is one blogger whose reviews I enjoy reading. They delve a little in literary criticism but still offer a clear picture of what the book is about, through his own reading experience. Other book reviewers maintain they do it as hobby, and aren’t particularly focused on the ‘writing aspect’, but would rather just talk about how the book made them feel. That’s fine too.
Show, don’t tell
A not-so-recent discussion over at J. Kaye’s Book Blog looked at whether or not it’s appropriate to use a book review formula. I have general rules for myself rather than a strict formula, the main one being ’show don’t tell’. It’s through writing about the book that readers will be aware what you liked/didn’t like. If you comment on how the technical aspects of the writing convey emotion and mood, you’re showing that this is something you value in books. If your review focuses more on the plot, then it will be clear that a compelling plot is important to you. I’m so sure I had this discussion on J. Kaye’s post, but my comments seem to have disappeared into one of those internet black holes. Weird.
Find your voice and keep it
A friend of mine once pointed out that my reviews tend to reflect the style of book I happen to be writing about. My brother found my review of The Secret History by Donna Tartt incredibly boring, mainly because it’s not a book he would ever read in a million years (his loss, right?). Rereading my review, I’ve made a lot of mistakes and contradicted much of what’s been said in this post.
But the more we write, the more our own voices emerge. This is true of creative writing as well as book reviewing. J.T. Oldfield is one book blogger who I think has established a very unique -not to mention hilarious- voice. Angela Meyer of Literary Minded is another whose voice and personality is entertaining and relatable. I must admit this is something I’m still working on. If someone asked me to describe my review ‘voice’ I would probably stare at them dumbly. I do that a lot.
I have much more to say on this topic, it seems a Part Deux is in order. I’ll leave you with a few more bloggers whose voices (and writing talent) keep me coming back for more:
Sam Cooney @ Not Dark Yet
Lorelei @ Lorelei V
Ryan Paine @ Socratic Ignorance Is Bliss
Estelle @ 3000 Books
Phill @ Toothsoup






I gotta say, I envy those people (yourself included) that can make reading a review an enjoyable experience. Every time I sit down to write a review, I just can’t seem to collate my thoughts enough to give it a unique perspective. I always end up writing five-hundred words that amount to no more than ‘Yeah I really liked this’ or ‘Actually this was a bit crap.’ The only time I ever get something vaguely interesting out of the process is when I do what I did in my latest blog post and talk about how the book affected me in real-life terms. Which doesn’t really count as a review.
Anyway, this is good advice and I’ll be trying some of it out next time a book moves me to review it. (:
@Phill – I think as long as it’s well-written and compelling, your unique perspective will come through. I enjoy reading how a book impacts on its readers’ lives. Makes it more relevant. There are no hard and fast rules about reviewing, it’s just a matter of good writing in the end. Also, if your review/musing attracts a response from your readers, then mission accomplished, right? (your latest blog post being a good example of this.)
On negative reviews : don’t think we should shy away from them, specially not the more famous and well known books; if for nothing else, it opens up avenues for discussion. If someone really liked the book, they can tell you the aspects they enjoyed, and if they didn’t – well, you share the opinion anyway. It keeps it more interesting, so long as the coments don’t read : “I didn’t like it.” and nothing else.
@anothercookiecrumbles: Isn’t discussion the reason we blog? The more diverse the opinions, the more stimulating the discussion becomes. Plus, it makes things a little interesting.
I will totally take the blame for your newsletter craze!
My problem is that there’s just so many books I dislike, and I don’t mind saying so. And since I often review books I read a long time ago (because I’m a fairly monogamous reader and I don’t do many memes, how would you get posts from me otherwise?) sometimes the ones I hate come up. And I don’t mind saying I hate classics. I’ve reviewed The Pearl, The Da Vinci Code, The Bell Jar, 1984…all books I hated that many people enjoy. Dissenting opinions are, afterall, just as valid.
When I was writing my review of Why I Became an Atheist, my husband was looking over my shoulder and said I ought to start reading and reviewing books I actually like, so I went back through the last few weeks of reviews and found negative ones were about 25%, which means to be really balanced, I have to start reviewing MORE books I hate. :)
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Does that mean if I do only negative reviews on my blog, it will become a search engine magnet for maligned books?
@J.T: I’m definitely with you on The Da Vinci Code. Haven’t read the Pearl or The Bell Jar, and we’ve agreed to disagree on Nineteen Eighty-Four :P. I found that my negative reviews get 0 comments compared to my positive ones. Not sure what this means…but I think I’m a bit soft on authors (maybe because I want to be one! haha) You can’t really decide before you read a book whether you’re going to like it, so I’m nopt sure how you’re going to start reviewing books that you hate..? (unless you go and review every other Dan Brown book out there)
@Caesar: I’m going to say yes! But I’m no expert on the inner workings of internet search engines.
Elena: Well, Jenners Take Another Chance Challenge is going to have us read something we are “prejudiced” against. She mentioned both James Patterson and Twilight as examples, and wouldn’t you know those are both books I’d pick (albeit reluctantly and only so that I can finish the challenge). So, there’s a reason to pick a book I have a strong feeling I won’t like to read and review.
I think the reason why I don’t write more negative reviews is a two part answer.
One, I tend not read a book if I think I won’t like it. If I do start a book and I can’t get into it I will generally put it down and never open it again. That being said the one time I accepted a book for a review that I couldn’t stand or finish I said it in my review. Suprising to me at the time, was that I got postive feedback on it.
The other reason is a little more whimpy on my part I guess. I know how much work and courage it takes to write something and put it out there for the world to see so I’m a little hesitant to hurt someone’s feelings. Of course since most of the authors will never read the review I’m not sure why I’m so concerened about it. It won’t stop me from posting a negative review but it may get me to tone my language down a bit.
@J.T: Sounds like a great challenge, after one friend’s insistence I attempted Twilight, but found the plot too complex and the language far too high-brow for my humble reading taste. I made it 50 pages in before getting overwhelmed by the sheer genius of it all.
@Ryan: On your second point, I did touch on this in an earlier post, because I want to publish my own writing some day, and the idea of tearing down someone else’s hard work is a little heartbreaking, but I guess it comes down to being critically aware of what we’re reading which is important! And of course, I’m a lot harsher when it comes to reviewing authors that are deceased :P
Wow. Thanks for the complement. I actually do get comments on my negative reviews and my mixed reviews. I don’t do many because usually I know if I’m going to like something before I buy it or request it for review.
The one I “buried” was The Neanderthal Parallax Trilogy. The first book won the Hugo; the second was on the shortlist the next year. I didn’t “bury” it to decrease its presence (It doesn’t have a presence anymore and I don’t have that many readers). I did “bury” it because so many of my readers are generalist readers. I’m gradually introducing them to sci-fi and didn’t want my first sci-fi review to be a negative one. Now that I’ve posted a list of all the novels on the Hugo shortlists, my readers know I hate that particular trilogy.
I’m subscribing to your RSS for a while to check on your reviews. (Does that sound arrogant? I don’t mean it that way at all. I want to see where you go after this post.) Great blog design, btw.
Cara: Thanks for dropping by! What you described with the Neanderthal Paraliax Trilogy doesn’t sound as spiteful as what I was imagining when you talked about ‘burying’. It sounds like you were just exercising a discerning taste in providing the right content for your readers. I’m not a huge reader of sci-fi but I’ve been trying to add more to my reading list. I’ve saved Anathem by Neal Stephenson for the holidays, and I reviewed a Hugo winner, albeit negatively (The Wanderer by Fritz Leiber).
Thanks for subscribing! :)
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